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I've heard they're not on speaking terms
This explains a lot..
The quiet days, the difficult ways
The things that you *forgot*

I had suspected who was to blame
But I won't point the finger
It's not my place and doesn't help
To let this stuff just linger.

Instead of listening one ignored
All the gentle prods
And carried on in ignorance
Not even giving nods.

Never to communicate
A dire thing indeed
So much time you both have lost
When both have been in need.

Everyone else, they saw it too
It wasn't only me
They even tried to get through to you
But neither of you would see

How very frequent we screwed our face
In anger and in frustration
At all the times you both turned your back
And there died our anticipation.

Well, here we are, still watching on
Waiting on you two
Hoping that you open the line
And ONE of you gets through.

I  hear you're not on speaking terms
Your heart and brain my dear
No pointing at the brain
Or the heart that lives in fear.

So come my love, I cherish you
Leave us in pain no longer
Talk to yourself and listen now
Our love will then grow stronger.
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boot-cheese-3000 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Now THIS is a very beautiful poem, as crazy as that sounds. It's just that it reminds me of a similar situation that I had recently got myself out of. The pain described in this piece of work is all too real, sorrowful, and unapologetic. I don't recall giving a poem a "Thumbs Up Award" so if I haven't consider yourself the 1st:

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yes--me and my oversized thumb just popped your cherry. :laughing: how does it feel?
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Jenova65 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
TY, there are more on my blog... :) x
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boot-cheese-3000 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Really? Link please. :icongrin--plz:
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Jenova65 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Sure, will note you :) 
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boot-cheese-3000 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Note received.:)
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darksoultea2 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent! Just brilliant! You are a true craftswoman with words.
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Jenova65 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much :) x
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Skaramine Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your talent with poetry is as beautiful as you yourself.
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Jenova65 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
^_^ bless you, you always say the nicest things, I appreciate that, truly I am humbled by you kind comments about my art :) x
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Skaramine Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's because you've got endless talent and timeless beauty, milady!
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